A break down of each scene:
Scene 2: Daughter sends out mass message on social networking site inviting everyone from her school over for a house party.
Scene 3: Party begins and she frantically runs around making sure nothing gets damaged, 'Friend' takes her into bathroom and pressures her into taking drugs.
Scene 4: Girl wakes up with a trashed house, and no time to clean it up before school.
Scene 5: Girl goes back to school but realises nobody is noticing her or speaking to her, nothing has changed.
Scene 6: Dad has seen the state of the house and calls from the office, (repeat of scene 1) and tells his daughter how disappointed he is.This is our first draft, we will be adding more as we develop our ideas and begin to create our short film.
Scene1
Dad: Hi Darling. Daughter: Hey DadDad: Look, I have a business trip this weekend. I will only be gone a day or two, so there is nothing to worry-Daughter: (Interrupts) So i’ll be home alone all weekend?!Dad: Yes! But this doesn't mean you can do whatever you like. I'm trusting you to be mature and grown up. I'm leaving you with a responsibility, remember that.Daughter: I am grown up dad! Dad: please don't disappoint me. Show me that your mature and trust worthy. Ok?Daughter: You can trust me dad!Dad: I'm going to give you a call later on. Theres money on the microwave for you to grab some food for dinner. Love you sweetie.Daughter: Ok thanks dad, love you too!
Scene 2
Daughter sends out mass message on social networking site inviting everyone from her school over for a house party.
Scene 3
Guests begin to arrive through the front door and girl greets them.Guests:-Thanks for invite, let's get this party started!
-Hey babe! How's it going?
Girl: Hi guys, come in! straight through to the living room.
(The night progresses and the girl frantically runs around trying to tidy up.)
Girl: Don't touch that!
Omg, who's vomit is that?!
Get out of my dad's room!!!
(After keeping a clear eye on what's going on in her house, her friend calls her into the toilet)
Guest: babe, come in here.
Girl: What's that?
Guest: Just try it, it's really good.
Girl: No way! You shouldn't be doing it, especially in my house.
Guest: Stop worrying, it's good stuff. It'll make you feel, you'll feel great. Do it with me.
(Girl goes to take the drug)
(The girl walks around her house hallucinating)
Scene 4
(Girl wakes up to a messy house, full of drunk and passed out friends. When the girl wakes up, she doesn't remember what happened the night before. She orders everyone to leave immediately.)
Girl: Everyone get out. You've gotta go!
Scene 5
Girl walks up to the group of girls standing by the doors
Girl: Hey! I cant remember a thing from last night.. did you have a good time? we should have more parties like that.
(nobody acknowledges her presence)
Scene 6
Girl: Hi dad, I just got home from school
Dad: Oh, to the house you completely trashed while I was away? You could've bothered cleaning it up. WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?
Girl: I can explain, I promise that's not what I had planned! everything just got out of control..
Dad: You know what, (name), Save it. I trusted you to be a responsible and be an adult in this situation. With your mother not around this is the last thing I expected of you. Im not even angry, I'm purely disappointed in you. You've taken advantage of the situation and I can't begin to think how you will earn my trust AGAIN.
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